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I am nominating this article for A-Class review because this is an extremely influential figure in French Polynesian history. She defeated a French invasion force in the Franco-Tahitian War and indirectly secured the independence of the Leeward Islands and the French protectorate of Tahiti (instead of outright annexation) for four decades after her victory.
The 45 mm gun would see some evolution, as the original 45 mm 19K anti-tank gun [14], developed at Plant No. 8, in 1935 by the 45 mm model 1934, which saw the semi-automatic mechanism replaced by an inertial operating mechanism. The turret featured in increase to 20 mm at 45 degrees sloping.
Writing: "preregistered" is a term of art for military science relating to artillery bombardments, explain what walking into a preregistered ambush means suffering a horrible artillery bombardment, and wiki link the technical term. Fixed. — Ed!(talk) 02:19, 10 October 2010 (UTC) Reply. [ reply]
is klunky. Perhaps "Today, Klis Fortress contains a museum where visitors to this historic military structure can see an array of arms, armor, and traditional uniforms." Done; This is not a comprehensive list of problems as it only covers the introduction.
"A turning point was the introduction of spin by George Uhlenbeck" - "turning point" and "spin" made me smile. Perhaps a different phrasing is required? A clear example of a Freudian turn of phrase on my part. Aaaargh did it again. Re-worded. Hawkeye7 21:20, 11 April 2013 (UTC)
Some introduction is needed for Grant's involvement in the Vicksburg campaign, as well the campaigning under his command in early 1863 and the dilemmas that faced him (e.g. that the city was well defended and any attack on it would be difficult and bloody, with early attempts to advance on the city from the north being unsuccessful)
I'm definitely using the (2007) [2006] edition. McPherson wrote a four page preface (pp. xi - xiv); the rest of the content is from Bearss (the information in my copy clearly notes "Introduction by James McPherson"). I don't see a need to list McPherson as an author given that I'm not citing any of the preface he wrote (which is just a bio of ...
